Summary of His Sins - My First Fiction Book

"His Sins" is a three generation family saga. It is about how the actions of one member of a family can be felt, and continue to be felt, by future generations.

Part I - Alexander and Janet - Alexander, at eighteen years of age, is determined to leave the mine; a mine that is killing his father. At 38 years old, his father is already coughing up phlegm and coal dust. Alexander's anger becomes intensified with the eventual early death of his father and the stillborn birth of his first born child causing yet another delay in his ability to leave the mine. He finally manages, along with Janet, to leave their mining community in Scotland for a new world where they believe that the streets are lined with gold. In the Peace River District of Canada, he finds that riches are not everywhere as he had thought. Realizing that disappointment and bad luck has continued to follow and haunt him wherever he has traveled, he takes his anger and bitterness out on his family.

Part II - Elsa, Alexander and Janet's daughter, was conceived on a night when Alexander, while in a drunken state, had taken Janet without thought for the pain he was inflicting upon her. She is loved by neither father nor mother. As a result she grows up where loneliness is her constant companion becoming the one who bears the brunt of her parents' frustration and anger. Because of the lack of love shown by her parents, elsa is completely lacking in self-esteem placing her in a vulnerable position. As a result she marries a man, much like her father, who is happy to have a wife that can be so easily controlled. And while raising seven children, she remains completely under his thumb, fearful and intimidated.

Part III - Sarah Ann is the second child of Elsa and Peter. She is spirited, spunky and determined. Watching her father's treatment of her mother, she quickly resolves to never allow herself to be treated in such a way by any man, ever.

As she grows older, appearing to be unscathed by her parents' dysfunctional relationship, she happily dates telling all that marriage doesn't interest her. Until she meets Adam! It is then she realizes that her family history has had an affect upon her as well. As Adam becomes more serious, she discovers that her issues of "trust" and especially "commitment" are problems she will have to overcome if she doesn't want to lose Adam forever. Will she be able to overcome them?

"His Sins" is a story about families and relationships; about what the results can be of one person's actions on another. It is also a story about the power of the human personality and how adversity can be overcome with strength and determination. Although it tells of bitterness and resentment, it also speaks of love.